Monday, February 20, 2012

My Freely Wodering Mind...

This is my first short story, I hope it sparks everyone's interest. Feedback is greatly appreciated!!

            It was a dark night. She had had a long day at work and was ready to be home. She walked up the walkway leading to her house which was surrounded by red rose bushes. She finally made it to her door, pulled out her keys, but noticed that the door had already been unlocked.
            It was her daughter’s night out with friends and her husband was still at work. She was confused, but thought nothing of it. She stepped through her doorway and noticed a narrow trail of crimson substance leading to her room. She was appalled; more by the fact of her clean white carpet being stained, then the fact that there was blood leading to her resting place.
            She immediately dropped her bag and followed the trail. On the way, there were many paintings on the wall, mostly of landscapes, nature, but there was also a family portrait on the floor. She picked up the portrait and stared at it, as if time had just slipped away. She was terribly frightened at the fact that where her face was in the portrait was where the glass was broken, as if someone punched it.
            She continued, more quickly to follow the trail, which lead her to the stairs to her bedroom. She quietly climbed each stair, as if her life had become slow motion. Then she stopped and listened. She heard a quiet bang on the floor, that progressively became louder and louder. She noticed that there were only a few steps left. She swallowed her fear and ran up the last few, and in a hurry, turned on all of the lights. The noise stopped. She knew something wasn’t right.
            She saw that the narrow trail of blood lead to her bed, into her bed. She walked over to the bed in her designer heels that clacked all the way. She finally reached the end of the trail and noticed that in the middle of her bed, her lavender comforter was turning a very dark red. She could taste the fear of the situation, but she knew what she had to do. She slowly moved her hands to the comforter, grabbed it in her hands then thought, One… Two… Three!! She pulled off the comforter and threw it across her large bedroom. The fowl aroma of copper filled her lungs, taking her breathe away only for a moment as she gasped to retrieve it.
            She stumbled backwards and tripped over one of her high heels. She caught her head on the corner of her desk, knocking her out. Unknowingly, when she fell, she knocked over the lit vanilla scented candle on her desk and it dripped burning wax on her unconscious head. She could feel the burning sensation, and although she was unconscious, she screamed as though the world had to know of her distress.
            Over her screams, as loud as they were, you could hear this obnoxious laughing. The misshapen, dismembered head of her best guy friend lie in her bed, bleeding almost as badly as her. Finally, after a moment or two, the head’s eyes bulge, as if some sort of strain was taking place, and the neck of the blood and wax covered figure was broken. Then there was silence, eerie silence.
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            The next morning the cops were called as soon as the husband returned home. What he and the cops had found was that there was no sign of a struggle, no narrow blood trail on the carpet, no broken family photo and no bloody comforter nor bed. All that was found was the body of a distraught wife who missed her best friend. Attached to her head, which stuck because of the now dried wax, was a note which read, Now we can truly be together again <3. The death was claimed by the police as a suicide and the husband felt as though she was having an affair.

Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Gotta Love Those Short Stories

   We received this very interesting packet of a few short stories, there were a few of them I have some thoughts on.
   The first one is a short story called Survivors by Kim Addonizio. This short story was about two gay male lovers and one of them is going to die. Only totally cruel thing is that the one male lover would prefer himself to die first, only for the reason of not wanting to put up with his lover's family and pet parrot. I find it almost realistic in a sense that almost anyone today would be selfish enough to say the same thing about their lover, shows how true love really is huh?
   The next very short story I liked was called The Talking Cat by Sharon Krinsky. This little story is about a woman who makes friends with another woman's cat, only by her shaking the cat's paw. The female owner of the cat becomes jealous. In a literal sense I think it's adorable, the idea of making friends with a little tiny cat. On the other hand though, this could be metaphorical, in which the cat could actually be a friend of the woman, rather then her pet, and is causing her to become jealous at the thought of her making a new friend without her.
   The last selection that I enjoyed was Wallet by Allen Woodman. This is a tale about a man who, in order to avoid getting the important contents of his wallet stolen, makes a false wallet and fills it with expired coupons and unnecessary artifacts. He ends up getting his wallet stolen by someone in a grocery store and everyone helps to get it back, only people who don't are thhe man and his son. They run for the car in order to escape the situation. I love this tale because it sounds like something my father would do. It's hilarious how clever people can get in guarding their needed posessions. I believe this story to be very relatable and entertaining.
   I think to make great short stories like these, you not only have to be brutally honest, but also add some fun and even make your audience think, which I can absolutely say that these short stories did!

Thursday, February 9, 2012

Bird by Bird

   As I began reading this book, I first noticed the cover. As I went on reading into the Introduction, I thought of a reason for the name of the book and the decor on the front. This is a book about ways to become a better writer, and I believe that the use of the title "Bird by Bird" is referring to the idea of taking things step by step. I also thought of the phrase, "Hitting two birds with one stone." I believe this could also be used in this case because some of the techniques will help you to get passed a certain obstacle(s).
   As I read the Introduction, I really enjoyed reading about her struggle to publishing. It's nice to know the perspective of an actual author, and to know it's not automatically going to be an easy journey to be a published writer. The journey she had to make, along with her faher being a pornography writer, as well as his drug addiction and early death was fascinating to read about. This really helps to give an idea of what can possibly get you started, or just an idea of what can. Many different people will have many different ways to be inspired with their writing.
   Although I have not fully dove into this reading yet, I am starting to slowly notice my mindset on writing to change. I feel that anything you can do can always have improvements. This book is a perfect example that your writing can never truly be perfected, BUT that doesn't mean that you can't reach just close enough for yourself and as long as you are truly satisfied with your writing, what others think is just miniscule. I believe that is a great lesson to help you get through your blocks in your writing.